Dear my teacher, Anita
Monday, 23 November 2015
My goal
My goal is to open a clothes shop by 2017. I need to improve my English first. I need to do English for designing clothes. I need to enrol a designing course in TAFE. I also need to get selling skills for my job.
I think I must give up many habits as sleeping late, watching many movies, playing games and study more. My familly will encourage me in my study and they will help me with anything. If someone tells me that I can not reach my goal, I will answer that I will try hard to study and the first who I invite to come to my shop will be them.
There is a local support group and I will join to volunter which can help me achieve my goal.
Monday, 2 November 2015
Granville College information.
Hi Rahima,
Thank you for your email. I will give you information about Granville College as I am studing here.
Granville College has many courses for you to chose. When you come you will meet the Customer service. I can say this college has a parking, canteen, comfortable classrooms with fresh air, good teachers who always help students to study well. The students come form all other countries and they also are very friendly. First day to class you must bring folder, pen, your information.
I am sending this email to you with a little information, if you need more I will respond again.
See you soon. Bye
Your friend.
Kim
Thank you for your email. I will give you information about Granville College as I am studing here.
Granville College has many courses for you to chose. When you come you will meet the Customer service. I can say this college has a parking, canteen, comfortable classrooms with fresh air, good teachers who always help students to study well. The students come form all other countries and they also are very friendly. First day to class you must bring folder, pen, your information.
I am sending this email to you with a little information, if you need more I will respond again.
See you soon. Bye
Your friend.
Kim
Tuesday, 27 October 2015
Hi Rahima.
How are you? Last holiday I visited my sister family at Tasmania. We met together after for six years ago.
My sister house beside beach, the view was very nice, I stay here for a week after that I left Tasmania and went back to Sydney, I continue went to Center Coast, I visited my friend for two days then we went to Canberra, we saw Tulip Flower Garden, It was very nice then had a diner at Kinn Thai restaurant.
I felt happy my holiday. I missed you, I am thinking meet you soon. Would you like coffee with me one day?
See you soon! Bye
Kim.
(This is my letter, I sent email to Rahima on 13/10/2015)
Thursday, 1 October 2015
Homework: readbook on holiday
The summary of "Blueback a fable for all ages" by Tim Winton.
The summary of "Blueback a fable for all ages" by Tim Winton.
His name was Abel Jackson, when he was ten years old and he could never remember a time when he could not dive.
His mother said he was a diver before he was born.He floated and swam in the warm ocean inside her for nine months so maybe it came naturally.
He had lived by the sea at Longboat Bay his whole life. Everyday was special.
But it all became much more precious the day he first shook hands with old Blueback.
Abel Jackson never regretted staying on at Longboat Bay. He lived the life of his boyhood everyday and he was happy.
Date borrowing book: 22/9/2015 at Merrylands Central Library.
Monday, 7 September 2015
Blogging in classroom
Blogging is fun because I can open my blog, then insert an image in my blog after I upload and publish pictures in my blog,
I like penguins, this picture is very nice.
Safety instruction in hospital
First keep quiet in the hospital.
Next wear gloves, shoes, a mask, a hat and an overcoat.
Then clean places do many things.
If patient needs help from a nurse, come and help them.
Finally be nice to all patient when they come here.
Sunday, 6 September 2015
Home work: Intruction
Let's talk about:
*How to lose weight easily?
- Eat 90 percent of your meal at home.
- Walk before dinner and you'll cut calories and you appetite.
- Put your fork and spoon down between every bite.
- Don't buy prepared food.
- Spend 10 minutes a day walking up and down stairs.
* How to eat healthy?
- Eat a variety of food.
- Include vegetables, wholegrains, fruit, nuts and seeds every day.
- Choose healthy fats and oils as Canola, Sunflower.
- Limit sugary, fatty, salty, take-away meals and snack.
- Drink mainly water.
* How to get better at English?
- Never forgot punctuation and capital.
- Make sure your printing is neat.
- Try reading more often.
- Get some books.
- Ask your teacher for some book recommendations.
- Look for educational software.
Let's talk about:
*How to lose weight easily?
- Eat 90 percent of your meal at home.
- Walk before dinner and you'll cut calories and you appetite.
- Put your fork and spoon down between every bite.
- Don't buy prepared food.
- Spend 10 minutes a day walking up and down stairs.
* How to eat healthy?
- Eat a variety of food.
- Include vegetables, wholegrains, fruit, nuts and seeds every day.
- Choose healthy fats and oils as Canola, Sunflower.
- Limit sugary, fatty, salty, take-away meals and snack.
- Drink mainly water.
* How to get better at English?
- Never forgot punctuation and capital.
- Make sure your printing is neat.
- Try reading more often.
- Get some books.
- Ask your teacher for some book recommendations.
- Look for educational software.
Summary of the title I read
Title of reading " Police TV" by Tim Vicary.
You must be carefully your bag when you go shopping, bank, and everywhere.
Dan and Sue were police officer in London. It was a Tuesday morning they sat upstairs in a window over the shops, Dan had a radio, they watched the people on the street.
Suddenly, the old woman fell down by the jogger ran into her and he said: " I am sorry, can I help you,? Here your bag". At the moment also had a young woman, she shouted at him "Don't run here" and she said: ' It's dangerous! Go away!'. Dan talked in his radio and the police car stopped jogger in North street.
The old woman lost a purse in her bag, Dan looked for the money form jogger but he could not found any. Dan and Sue went back to the shops they watched on the TV camera, Dan had an idea.Sue became same somebody on the street, she got a lot of money in the bank and let everybody saw it and took a radio.
Next day Sue went to the bank and droped some near her feet. People on the street looked at her. There was the long hair man picked up the money helped her. Sue continue walked slowly down the street and bought some things in the shop. At the moment there was a woman with a baby following her. Suddenly the jogger, Peter Jone, ran into Sue and she fell over. There were many things everywhere. 'I am sorry. Let me help you' the jogger said and the woman also asked ' Are you OK?', but he looked radio, he shouted 'A police radio? Give the money, quick!'. He took the money and ran. Sue caught the woman and called a police car on her radio his name was Jim.
Jim ran following and the jogger, Peter Jone hit Jim and he fall into the water, Dan came help Jim
At the police station, the woman's Linda and Peter Jone were a couple they stealed money for the people on the shops, TV camera also helped gave the police found crime quickly.
Sunday, 30 August 2015
The story of "Ali and his Camera"
Summary of the story I read
Title of reading " Ali and his Camera" by Raymond Pizante.
Ali is Turkish. He lived in Istanbul, he liked to look at the views of the boats, trees, people and everything... He liked taking photos but he hasn't got a camera because he was a student and did not have enough money.
The day after that, he carried two heavy bags for an old woman in the market, and she gave her son's old camera for him.
He learnt about photography with Selim. Selim was an old man, has a happy face and Ali's teacher.
He was learning quickly and took beautiful photos.
Finally, the newspaper had a job for a young person was going to learn photography, then Ali was chosen, he was going to start a new job and he was happy his work now.
Date borrowing book: 26/8/2015
Monday, 10 August 2015
I am Kim, I have been TAFE for 1 month. Now I am staying at lab room, my teacher has to teach for me open blog today. I fell happy so I know more many thing.
My house nearby school, I came to school everyday on foot. I study 3 days for a week
I will try to study good English so I can get a good job in the future.
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